Sit (Broken Hearted Rondel)

I sit.
Outside your window.
Mournful.
Despondent.
Heart has broken in twain.
I feel nothing but pain.
I scream your name.
Silence.
Dawn appears.
Rosy fingers stretch across-
The dew laden grass.
Yet still.
Outside your window.
I sit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations Daniel, on your success in Brian’s “A RONDEL” contest with this intriguingly sad lyric poem. It's easy to see why you placed 2nd! Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Butler Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Congrats on your win! Great poem! -Mike
La France Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest
Foster Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 1:33 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fine verse...Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Lovely poem! Congratulations! andrea
Brown Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest Daniel. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Daniel.Rgds Brian.My latest contest SPACES is now open
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 11:51 AM
So sad a write. I can feel those screams. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Burton Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Loved the beginning and the end, very creative piece here.. each line tells a drama. Enjoy your sunday. :)
Strand Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 9:07 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Daniel.Rgds Brian
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