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Sister, Sister

Sister, sister, life would be awful without my sister, she is my rock, the voice of reason, my safe harbor; not an older sibling but younger- always my anchor, oh, she was born with an incredible inner strength. She possesses all the beautiful qualities of my mother, when I am ill- it is my sister who holds my hand; by my side she will always and forever stand, for me she goes the distance, no matter the length. My sister is my soul's deepest love, I will always listen and depend on her advice; it is full of wisdom and is usually quite concise, mother must be smiling down from her heavenly land. Through all life's twists and turns we are one, oh, those days of childhood play until the sun was done. _________________________ December 19, 2015 (Edit) Poetry/Dante's Canzone/Sister, Sister Copyright Protected, ID 15-1218-968-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Rhyme Pattern- abbcaddcXeedff Submitted to the contest, Strand Choice 4 Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 1/24/2020 3:19:00 PM
Constance, it is a blessing to have a sister such as yours in your life, a true lifelong treasure. This is a fitting tribute to that special relationship you have. Congrats on your placement and for working within a very challenging rhyme scheme ~ John
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Date: 1/24/2020 6:19:00 PM
John, thanks for the congrats and the wonderful comment, yes it was a difficult rhyme scheme to follow _Constance
Date: 1/24/2020 1:01:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win, Constance:-) Terrific poem your sister would absolutely love! I have to try this interesting form...
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Date: 1/24/2020 6:18:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, oh yes, my sister loves it very much_Constance
Date: 1/23/2020 5:17:00 PM
You're blessed for a sister to be there for you .. good luck in the contest 4
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Date: 1/24/2020 9:04:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the visit and yes, I am blessed with my sister as my parents reside in heaven, we only have each other and a brother who is wonderful too _Constance

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