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Sir Mick Jagger and Jerry Hall

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Singer Sir Mick Jagger Walks with a swagger Wriggling snakelike hips Pouts with big rubbery lips Texan model Jerry Hall Is very skinny and tall Their Bali wedding wasn’t valid Mick no longer lives on salad! Clerihew Couples for Valentine's Day Prizes Poetry Contest Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire 1/11/19

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/22/2019 3:14:00 PM

LOL, so glad this was a big winner

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/19/2019 11:33:00 AM

Very witty and creative, dear Jan. Hearty congrats for your win and many thx for your kind words re my win. Best on you - bob

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2019 9:55:00 AM

Cleverly done, Jan. You said so much in just 8 lines! Pleased to share the podium with you:) ~ Our weather is much better than it was...we had 3 consecutive sunny days! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:20:00 AM

Oh glad to hear you have good weather yhey have snow in tbe uk i hope our island doesnt get it too:-( Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2019 6:01:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:19:00 AM

Thanks Sara it was a fun contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2019 6:56:00 PM

Yours was one of my very favorites, Jan. Excellent style with this form you do have. Congrats , my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:17:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I tried to keep it short and snappy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/17/2019 2:28:00 PM

Congrats Jan on you deserving win!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thanks sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/17/2019 2:00:00 AM

Many congrats Jan, you described Mick so well, haha.. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:15:00 AM

Thanks ann:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/16/2019 9:58:00 PM

Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:14:00 AM

Thanks kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/16/2019 5:05:00 PM

Very clever, Jan! I learned some facts I didn't know! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 10:14:00 AM

I was horrified to read their marriage was annulled so her divorce settlement was less than if they were married It's not like he can't afford it! Hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2019 3:45:00 PM

Yeah, that boy needs some protein...LOL Great one, Jan. Loved it! Congratulations on your win! hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 9:32:00 AM

Lol charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2019 3:10:00 PM

That couple's union was the epitome of opposites attract Jan. They wowed us for some time.You captured well their personas! Congratulations on your second place win my friend! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 9:32:00 AM

Thanks connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/16/2019 2:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 9:31:00 AM

Thanks joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2019 2:05:00 PM

Mick's not the handsomest fella in the world, but he's dated some beautiful women. Nicely penned, Jan. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2019 9:30:00 AM

Yes he sure has had his fair share of females in his life, jerry hall is now married to Rupert Murdoch.. he's in his 80s and she is his 4th wife I think! Mick had tragedy with l'wren Scott dying so tragically hugs Jan x

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 1/14/2019 11:48:00 AM

I love this. Never knew about them so I did more reading thanks to your clever clerihew. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 1:03:00 PM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2019 10:36:00 AM

I just love the non-sequitur (for me, anyway) at the end of the second stanza. Still laughing... G.L. in the contest, Jan! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 1:03:00 PM

I can only guess he must have a great lawyer to have the marriage annulled, they have 4 children together. I am sure she came out with a decent settlement but not as much if they had legally been married!@=_ hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2019 3:05:00 PM

Good one, Jan...great pen.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 3:06:00 PM

Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 1/12/2019 7:13:00 AM

So funny JAN, you amaze me sometimes my friend, This one has to be 1st place!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 1:42:00 PM

Will wait and see Bobby but thanks for your comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/11/2019 10:25:00 PM

:) funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2019 1:17:00 AM

Thanks Art:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2019 8:14:00 PM

Love how you did this. I know nothing about Mick Jagger's life these days. I barely followed him from the 60's but he sure made a huge impact on the world of music. VERY well done, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2019 1:17:00 AM

I don't follow either but think one recent girlfriend L'Wren Scott committed suicide. hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/11/2019 5:05:00 PM

When one is 87, bedtime is always early! Mahalo for the laugh! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2019 5:26:00 PM

lol Rico I wonder what she sees in muti millionaire Mr Murdoch old joke I know lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sand Blown

Date: 1/11/2019 3:35:00 PM

may the rolling stones be with you

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2019 4:45:00 PM

lol thanks Sand Blown:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson

Date: 1/11/2019 3:12:00 PM

What a picture especially the depiction of Mick! Very entertaining,Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2019 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/11/2019 3:11:00 PM

Love it! You are the humor queen!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I was reading an article about jerry Hall marrying Rupert Murdoch was so surprised as he is so much older than her, she's his 4th wife hope they find happiness:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/11/2019 2:57:00 PM

Good one Jan, and he's still rocking lol. Good luck. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2019 3:00:00 PM

I've never been much of a fan Tom but I'm told he is a great performer:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/11/2019 2:49:00 PM

Lol! Jan, You nalied this challenge. I liked the couple you chose.So they weren't really married? It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2019 2:59:00 PM

The marriage was 'annulled' as it was declared it wasn't legal - I guess it would have made a huge difference to the 'settlement, she's now married media mogul Rupert Murdoch who at 87 is considerably older than she is. :-) hugs Jan xx