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Sir May I See Your Daughter-

I was outside her house as I open the gate 
walking through the trellis
 I approached the steps
 I look up and I sigh 
As breathe and anxiety
 I have arrived I am looking so
 in part for her open heart 
but I might embrace her pains as I call her name 
I go up the steps to the right of me
A porch swing now i knock on the door 
and it opens and her father appears
 I say how are you sir may I see your daughter
 he glares at me he towers over me 
he looks I appear to be quivering
 but I inhale I exhale the fear away 
still I stand at ease now   
And I won't back down this day
 he said what is your intent with my girl 
why are you here
 I tell him sir I want to get to know her
 but in this I reveal may I approach you sir 
with all due respect I love your daughter sir
 but this you must get I trust your heart sir
 that I shall display a Godly gentlemanly foray
 I want to rest in you sir and give you no doubts 
I want nothing but the best for your daughter's heart
 so may I prove myself to you and be doodly bound
I so know that her heart is God's first yours and your wives 
and I want to earn it may I sir be yours first may I earn your trust
My future dreams and desire
Only if it's God's will and your blessing years and years away
I want her hand in marriage the father says Boy I admire your courage
You're astute standing you're just a boy trying to be a man
I got my eye on you so within your honesty
If you be real with me we'll see what the future hold but keeping your memory
This is our girl so you're on probation
Ain't no messing around with my darling child
So if you think you're interested you must confess this
My eye will be on you so watch what you do just be true I'll give you the clue
Remember first this is our girl and maybe one day would loan her to you
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