Sink Or Swim

Sink or Swim?

I never learned how to swim at all 
I was young and fell in as I recall
I was frightened of water after that
And reacted to water just like a cat

I never had chance to swim in the sea
I wish I could but that isn’t me
I go to a pool try to stay afloat
But I am afraid I am not a boat

Lessons at forty and still couldn’t swim
I bobbed about on floats therein
The most I could do is float on my back
I had to face it and take the flack

Children swam by and made me feel daft
I wish I could get myself onto a raft
Sink or swim? I can’t stay on top
I sink to the bottom in one big drop
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 14, 2011 at 6:59 PM
stay afloat and get by lol, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Well expressed thoiught on sink or swim, quite thoughtful, Pamela
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 3:50 PM
A nice little humorous poem with some good descriptiveness and rhyming. This is impressive work.
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Cute and humorous work but not funny when one is experiencing it..Any fear makes one's life not as enjoyable..Sara
Fahey Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Very clever! Love the rhyming and the details. Ellen
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