Singularity

ZAP POW Intrinsic Inside news beyond Hopes dashed No pieces left For times elbow Holds no crutch Singularity ZIP BAM Congruent Feelings enmeshed Scrounged within The numbness subsides Leaving delight Past the darkest night Pulsar WACK TING Livid Singed to the bone Being lost Without deaths glow But hope rings in Triumphant score Dynamic WHAM BANG Persevere Life beyond emptiness Lures in mindful eyes Sipping from the eternal cup Homing into happiness Leaving pain behind Enlightened YING TAP TAP TAP… Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/23/2014 3:40:00 PM
love this creative write, my friend
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Date: 1/23/2014 2:41:00 PM
Wow, Russell this an excellent piece, very creative and the title alone drew me in. I like the way it flows and the unique structure here.
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Date: 1/22/2014 12:51:00 PM
Reminds me of watching an episode of the "Batman" television show from the sixties. You have just received my 7000th comment.
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Date: 1/21/2014 11:35:00 AM
an explosion of a wired mind; very imaginativem russell... i like this different sytle from you... grreat stuff.. zinnng!.. huggs
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Date: 1/21/2014 8:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..I thought of old comic books with superheroes when I started reading it..Thanks for stopping by..I have done a sentence that is read down and a sentence at the end that is read down in the same poem in other words a start line and end line that one reads down and it says something as well as the poem..It is not easy though..Sara
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:30:00 AM
this does not just speak to me Russell it shouts to be heard fantastic pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/21/2014 12:54:00 AM
Were you watching the old 60s Batman shows while you wrote this? "BANG", "TAP", "WACK"? LOVE THIS! You ended this with such an elegant force...an ending filled with a needful joy. KA-POWIE!
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