Russell Sivey Poet Free verse

Singularity

ZAP

POW

Intrinsic

Inside news beyond
Hopes dashed
No pieces left
For times elbow
Holds no crutch

Singularity

ZIP

BAM

Congruent

Feelings enmeshed
Scrounged within
The numbness subsides
Leaving delight
Past the darkest night

Pulsar

WACK

TING

Livid

Singed to the bone
Being lost
Without deaths glow
But hope rings in
Triumphant score

Dynamic

WHAM

BANG

Persevere 

Life beyond emptiness
Lures in mindful eyes
Sipping from the eternal cup
Homing into happiness
Leaving pain behind

Enlightened

YING

TAP TAP TAP…

Russell Sivey

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Jack Horne January 23, 2014 at 3:40 PM love this creative write, my friend

Tim B January 23, 2014 at 2:41 PM Wow, Russell this an excellent piece, very creative and the title alone drew me in. I like the way it flows and the unique structure here.

Robert Pettit January 22, 2014 at 12:51 PM Reminds me of watching an episode of the "Batman" television show from the sixties. You have just received my 7000th comment.

Nette Onclaud January 21, 2014 at 11:35 AM an explosion of a wired mind; very imaginativem russell... i like this different sytle from you... grreat stuff.. zinnng!.. huggs

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2014 at 8:15 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..I thought of old comic books with superheroes when I started reading it..Thanks for stopping by..I have done a sentence that is read down and a sentence at the end that is read down in the same poem in other words a start line and end line that one reads down and it says something as well as the poem..It is not easy though..Sara

Shadow Hamilton January 21, 2014 at 7:30 AM this does not just speak to me Russell it shouts to be heard fantastic pen Shadow x smile hug

Poet Tacito January 21, 2014 at 12:54 AM Were you watching the old 60s Batman shows while you wrote this? "BANG", "TAP", "WACK"? LOVE THIS! You ended this with such an elegant force...an ending filled with a needful joy. KA-POWIE!