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Sings the Evening Swallow

In the moonlit shadows
  faint and distant images race across the water surface,
  blue on grey clouds smoky eye the sky
  with checkmate figures and patterns in the darkness,
 it is that recognized  time and the midnight hour.

Etched among the willows
  sings the evening swallow
  lost in its shrill and silent interlude
  that whistles down chasing the wind.

Between the firefly lights in the clover fields
  and the silently stilled pond
  she sings alone  unfrightened
  hidden safe beneath the thick leaved oak.

Drawn up by the wind to explore the vast horizon
  sings the evening swallow calling softly out
  into the oncoming darkness unseen, unrecognized, entranced
  by the permanence and passage of time
  chasing the fleeting aftermath of days long passed.

Like a blind obsession
 sings the evening swallow
 calling out in lonesome song
who does your crying now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/10/2015 12:54:00 PM
I like the theme of your poem. Some lovely ideas elegantly expressed...Very nice! May I humbly suggest you change "sings" For: "twitters and mumbles". Seems a little more appropriate for a swallow. I enjoyed the read...A seven! My best regards, DM Babbit! :) john
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