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Singing a New Song

Singing a New Song Today I heard a country song I hadn’t heard for many years I closed my eyes and felt the pain Rememb’ring when we shared our love Before the days that broke my heart The memory filled these eyes with tears My cheeks were wet with spilling tears the singer singing her sad song As emptiness invades my heart I gazed down on the lonely years For I no longer have your love And fear I cannot bear the pain It is a low and cutting pain My eyes they shed a million tears As the sad tale of our lost love Is captured in the singer’s song I wonder just how many years To mend a shattered broken heart But will it ever mend, this heart Repair itself and ease the pain I think of all the wasted years Of all the bleak and useless tears Just like the lyrics of the song A troubled, doomed and hopeless love If you came back to claim my love could I entrust you with my heart? Or, like the woman in the song Would your return bring only pain? My life forever filled with tears Throughout more long and lonely years And would it be as in past years You’d pour contempt on my true love You’d laugh at all my pleading tears And ridicule my breaking heart. I must find strength to conquer pain And live no more this mournful song No wasted years, no cruel false heart Disloyal love or wounding pain No hurt or tears in my new song Sestina----1-song 2-years 3-pain 4-love 5-heart 6-tears

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Date: 9/14/2011 1:12:00 AM
wow!It was placed in a soup contest.As I see from Carolyn's comment below.That is excellent.
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:09:00 AM
An emotional write from you.This form is new to me.Beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/20/2010 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Margaret, on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations Margaret on your beautiful Sestina's honored place. Enjoy lady. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/8/2010 9:32:00 AM
thats was really i liked it and congrats
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2010 3:17:00 AM
Margaret - Many congrats on winning coveted spot in contest..... Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 5:19:00 PM
Hi Margaret.I think this is such a hard form to write in.Yet you have managed it so skilfully.You have stayed true to the essence of your creation from beginning to end through the flow of your words.Yet also remained true to the Sestina form.I applaud your ability as a poet and congratulate you on a well deserved win.I really enjoyed this.Love June (Sylvia)
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:43:00 PM
Wow, I really find this form so challenging and you pulled this off wonderfully, Margaret! This is amazing and very worthy of your win! Super congrats! -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:50:00 AM
Nice work, Margaret! Big congratulations to you for this fine placement in the soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/23/2010 5:46:00 PM
Gosh, Margaret, where oh where are you? I've tried to contact you and never can find out what happened. How wonderful to win in this big contest with a sestina. Such an ambitious form to tackle. congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/23/2010 12:50:00 PM
Dear Maggie, My warm congratulations on your win in PS Intl. Contest! Have not heard from you in eons!! Hope you're doing very well, Maggie.. God bless. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/23/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Margaret in The PoetrySoup International Contest with your amazing poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:13:00 PM
Warmest congratulations, loved your poem it made for a great read, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 11/22/2010 9:48:00 PM
Congrats for being among the winners, Cheers i take inspiration from you cheers suresh
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Margaret. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest "The Sestina" Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 10:03:00 AM
Very, very nice. You conquered the repetition and made it into a country song. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:40:00 AM
Congrats Margaret on your HM in the Sestina contest... enjoy your wonderful honor for an equally wonderful write...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/7/2010 4:38:00 AM
You could make a country song of this Maggie! I hope you are putting your feather headress OR spurs on for my contest? Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2010 11:43:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Like the hope in the last line. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:27:00 AM
AWESOME, Margaret. YOu did super with this form, and if anybody can do it, you certainly shoudl be able to. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:57:00 AM
Very, very good my poetic friend... I look forward to judging this contest.. There are so many to choose from... It proves to be a challenge...... Good luck....:JP]
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:32:00 PM
gosh, everyone is putting me to shame trying this form. I just keep putting it off becaus of all my other things to do. Like this crazy commenting, which I love nonetheless. Very well done and I wish you luck, if it's for that contest. LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 5/2/2010 8:19:00 AM
Very well done!!!
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