Andrea Dietrich Poet Dizain

Sing With Exuberance

Sing with exuberance. There’s so much of
great wonder in the world. Sing happily
with gratitude to God for skies above;
for mountains, plains and valleys that you see;
for all creations meant for you and me;
for sounds of nature; for your love’s sweet voice;
for scents you smell; for foods to taste; rejoice!
God’s love is unconditional, so raise
your voice! Be glad you even have the choice.
For my free will I give to God my praise.

Nov. 20, 2021
For Unseeking Seeker's Agendaless Exuberance Poetry Contest
Total 100 syllables (10 per each 10 lines): Checked by Howmanysyllables.com
 Rhyme pattern ababbccdcd

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Paige Hind September 2, 2024 at 6:32 PM I loved this Dizain of yours. You are so right <3

Jack Horne December 12, 2021 at 7:10 AM yes, we all have so much to give thanks for

Sara Kendrick December 6, 2021 at 2:15 PM I like this one. We take for granted so much in life and sometimes we experience something that opens our eyes just a little. We had the COVID and I still haven't gotten back all my sense of smell and taste. Somedays it is better than others and I will say oh, I can actually smell lemon or my body powder again. Sometimes I will be able to taste something that had been either bland or bad tasting when it was my tastebuds and not the dish. Then once again enjoy food. I enjoyed reading this one. SK

John Watt November 30, 2021 at 10:22 AM Andrea, I just love all the themes you present in this beautifully crafted dizain... joy, gratitude, nature, singing, God's love, our 5 senses, free will. So much to be grateful for. I also love the exuberance of your writing, it reads like a psalm of thanksgiving. A fav for me. Blessings to you ~ John

Sam Kauffman November 29, 2021 at 11:33 AM Truly a lusty song of exuberant, joyful, "unconditional" praise Andrea! Just made my heart sing! Congratulations on your win. Sending all the blessings of the Christmas season dressed in boundless exuberance.

Karen Jones November 27, 2021 at 3:07 PM Wow this reads like a song from the bible great job!

Unseeking Seeker November 27, 2021 at 2:05 AM Exuberance springing from heart’s gratitude! Beautiful! Thanks for sharing, Andrea, congrats on your win

Valsa George November 21, 2021 at 6:14 PM A lovely hymn of Thanksgiving to the Lord, Andrea !

Delice Arleen Skelly November 21, 2021 at 4:34 AM Joyful praise...Delice

Tom Cunningham November 21, 2021 at 3:03 AM We do indeed have so much to be grateful for Andrea. Tom

Eve Roper November 20, 2021 at 8:55 PM Beautiful , Andrea,

Darlene De Beaulieu November 20, 2021 at 4:15 PM Hello Andrea, When i listen to my music, I sometimes sing along. Hugs x

Paulette Calasibetta November 20, 2021 at 3:49 PM Dear Andrea, What a beautiful tribute to faith....Lovely! Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette

Sotto Poet November 20, 2021 at 12:40 PM Andrea, I appreciate this lovely piece you've written. I'm delighted you're feeling creative to invent such an upbeat poem.

Victor Buhagiar November 20, 2021 at 12:22 PM That's what I miss most in our churches. Few people because of the pandemic and no singing. Hugs.

Jack Horne November 20, 2021 at 12:05 PM love this joyful write, my friend. Have a lovely trip x

Vijay Pandit November 20, 2021 at 9:19 AM Enjoyed the upbeat voice of your poem, Andrea. I hear the sound of exuberance in your words.