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March.6. 2025
Three Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
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Sing, Oh Bird

“Even the hardest hearts grow sensitive to bird songs ~ nature’s lovesome orchestra.” ~ by Poet

Oh! Little bird with plumage bright, Don’t move away from my sight. All the world lies still to listen to your joyful trill.
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Neumann Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Trilling ...XXX
Miller Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 2:36 AM
A great short poem I like the last line the best, congratulations
DiMino Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Delightful, Valsa; sing away! Blessings.
Daniels Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Excellent in its simplicity. Captures the moment perfectly. Xx
Rolland Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 1:27 AM
a wonder, i can't stand a day without listening birds, your poem is so cute, have a nice week end dear poet
Greenhough Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Happy, gentle poem with a bird as an ambassador swept me away to my bird watching foray. The photograph adds beauty and color. It won my heart.
Proxenos Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:34 AM
Hi Valsa, What a cute Verse. Looks a little like one of our SOUTH AFRICAN BIRDS, I saw it on the cover of a magazine at the doctors waiting rooms so took a picture. The orange is on his back and beak though, but I thought it was also cute, so took a pic.. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:10 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Sing, Oh Bird" write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Loving Iii Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:00 AM
You must have had that moment when the humming bird made it's appearence.
Rodgers Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Dear Valsa, So Beautiful!! I think the line "All the world lies still to listen to your joyful trill" is breathtaking. It really captures the idea that even in a busy world, there are moments when everything seems to pause, and all that matters is the beauty of the present. I love how the bird's song becomes a universal language, understood and appreciated by all. Amen, My Sister! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:55 AM
- Beautiful, Valsa ... we love birdsong and these beautiful flying little creatures :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Gifford Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:17 AM
Hello Valsa, both picture and words are beautiful. This is such a lovely piece. Makes me inpatient for Spring’s arrival to hear the birds singing. Have a wonderful day, my friend.
Empress Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Awwn what a beautiful verse, can almost imagine someone sing this to the birdie, and your quote is so true, even the hardest hearts soften to the birdsongs, unless they are too loud than it gets a bit too muchS haha: especially my family macaws they scream/ not sing/ haha Pleasure reading this gem! In three lines youv said so much. Best wishes always
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