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March.6. 2025

Three Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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“Even the hardest hearts grow sensitive to bird songs ~ nature’s lovesome orchestra.” ~ by Poet Oh! Little bird with plumage bright, Don’t move away from my sight. All the world lies still to listen to your joyful trill.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/8/2025 3:54:00 AM

Trilling ...XXX

Terry Miller

Date: 3/8/2025 2:36:00 AM

A great short poem I like the last line the best, congratulations

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/7/2025 12:24:00 PM

Delightful, Valsa; sing away! Blessings.

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 3/7/2025 8:09:00 AM

Excellent in its simplicity. Captures the moment perfectly. Xx

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/7/2025 1:27:00 AM

a wonder, i can't stand a day without listening birds, your poem is so cute, have a nice week end dear poet

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/6/2025 6:56:00 PM

Happy, gentle poem with a bird as an ambassador swept me away to my bird watching foray. The photograph adds beauty and color. It won my heart.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/6/2025 11:34:00 AM

Hi Valsa, What a cute Verse. Looks a little like one of our SOUTH AFRICAN BIRDS, I saw it on the cover of a magazine at the doctors waiting rooms so took a picture. The orange is on his back and beak though, but I thought it was also cute, so took a pic.. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/6/2025 10:10:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Sing, Oh Bird" write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/6/2025 10:00:00 AM

You must have had that moment when the humming bird made it's appearence.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/6/2025 5:34:00 AM

Dear Valsa, So Beautiful!! I think the line "All the world lies still to listen to your joyful trill" is breathtaking. It really captures the idea that even in a busy world, there are moments when everything seems to pause, and all that matters is the beauty of the present. I love how the bird's song becomes a universal language, understood and appreciated by all. Amen, My Sister! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2025 1:55:00 AM

- Beautiful, Valsa ... we love birdsong and these beautiful flying little creatures :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/6/2025 1:17:00 AM

Hello Valsa, both picture and words are beautiful. This is such a lovely piece. Makes me inpatient for Spring’s arrival to hear the birds singing. Have a wonderful day, my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/6/2025 1:02:00 AM

Awwn what a beautiful verse, can almost imagine someone sing this to the birdie, and your quote is so true, even the hardest hearts soften to the birdsongs, unless they are too loud than it gets a bit too muchS haha: especially my family macaws they scream/ not sing/ haha Pleasure reading this gem! In three lines youv said so much. Best wishes always