Darren White Poet Free verse

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Sing Me a Song - Collaboration With Claudia Polydoro

Write me a poem
                                                       Sing me a song
                                                       Kick me some ass
                                                Write me some words
                                                Jump me some air
                                                Give me some cake
                                         Blow me a kiss
                                         Show me you care
                                         Shake up my world
                                 Make me laugh
                                 Light up my days
                                 Bring me new breath
                         Whip me a cream
                         Shake me a drink
                         Kiss me your tongue
                 Make me believe
                 Wrap me your arms
                 Bend me a rule
        Trust me a secret
        Tell me your truth
        Hold me prison
Call me your love
Twist me inside
Burn me your sun

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May 17, 2017
Copyright © Darren White and Claudia Polydoro

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Richard Lamoureux May 20, 2017 at 9:17 AM It reads well forwards and backwards. I enjoyed this collaboration. Darren White May 20, 2017 at 9:57 AM It does indeed, like stairs, they work either way too. Thanks Richard :)

Arthur Vaso May 19, 2017 at 10:17 PM You both gave me a smile, such beauty and harmony! Darren White May 20, 2017 at 12:41 AM Fun, isn't it :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 19, 2017 at 1:41 PM A real laid-back style w/bounce and sass, Darren and Claudia. It's cool, poetic free-jack jazz. You two blow poetic words so well together. A creative 7! Love and smiles. Darren White May 19, 2017 at 1:49 PM Thank you, Freddie :) For the compliments, the 7 and the smiles :)

Chris Green May 18, 2017 at 3:33 PM Such a creatively crafted piece from two absolutely wonderful poets. You two work so well together. I really like ho you built this and the word choices. This one does dance across the page. Bravo to both poets Darren White May 18, 2017 at 10:04 PM Fun, eh Chris? Like we're climbing the stairs!

Lisa Ricci May 18, 2017 at 9:52 AM Hello to both authors. The formatting and layout are marvelous. You both do Free Verse proud. This is how its done by letting words and thoughts flow and unbridled. Without saying the emotive factor is present and alive. Thank you both for sharing. Congratulations on your collaboration. Well done completely and entirely. PS you have played a song for your readers. Darren White May 18, 2017 at 12:55 PM Hi Lisa :) you are absolutely right. The joy we have in writing together speaks here I think (and now I go sleep)

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 18, 2017 at 8:56 AM Whip me a poem Cherry on top Taste me a smile. You guys wrote such a fun uplifting piece, it is literally impossible not to smile:) Amitiés Darren White May 18, 2017 at 12:51 PM Anne-Marie, thank you :) We love writing together!

Sara Ella May 17, 2017 at 8:41 PM So much emotion and energy - Darren and Claudia - your poem is so fun! :D I hope you both keep writing more together <3 Darren White May 17, 2017 at 10:39 PM I'll whip her into action ;) Now when are YOU going to write a poem with me?

Eve Roper May 17, 2017 at 12:29 PM love the stairway to a living emotion, Darren... Well done Claudia ~* Claudia Polydoro May 17, 2017 at 12:39 PM Thank you Eve! I love writing with Darren <3 Darren White May 17, 2017 at 12:34 PM Yeah, thanks Eve :) Also on behalf of Clau!

Tim Smith May 17, 2017 at 8:36 AM Share me your smile : ) Claudia Polydoro May 17, 2017 at 10:43 AM Anytime! :) :) Darren White May 17, 2017 at 8:46 AM Here is your smile, now light up my day :)

Claudia Polydoro May 17, 2017 at 6:54 AM Yessssss - I love it - hehehe - I still sing it every time I'm reading :) - we did good ;) thanks for the fun of writing it with me <3 <3 Darren White May 17, 2017 at 6:57 AM I love it, always :) <3