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Since First I Saw You

Since first I saw you, it was your eyes,
mesmerizing, your gaze transporting
me to a realm, not of fantasy, real,
where young men go when cupid’s
arrow takes root.

Since first I saw you, it was your lips,
captivating, holding me frozen 
in anticipation of our lips brushing
for the first time.

Since first I saw you, it was your voice,
a crescendo, light, invigorating, 
each word you speak intensifies 
my hearing, enveloping each
note, time ceases as I hang motionless
savoring, memorizing.

Since first I saw you, it was your hair,
long, flowing, gently rising above
your shoulders as a slight breeze
passes through sending waves
of your essence my way. 
The sun magnifying each strand, 
highlighting the minute
variances of invigorating color, 
creating a halo effect, a portrait of
your beauty forever imprinted.

Since first I saw you, It was you,
my love forever more for you,
only you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/28/2010 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations Mac on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2010 3:09:00 PM
You made me fall in love today!! congrats on your win!! pretty poem and romantic!
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:08:00 AM
Great expressions here- Congrats to you Mac- I married a girl with golden hair that seemed to glisten like a billion tiny suns
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:08:00 PM
wow, an awesome tribute. Wish my hubbie would write something like that for me. Congrats. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" Mac. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:48:00 PM
Very romantic and lovely. I bet she loves it too. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 3:14:00 PM
Congrats Mac on your HM in Joe's contest.. this is a beautiful..and extraordinary write of great luv.. enjoy your special honor ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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