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sIn is a bin what i meen by that is sIn is rubbish trash bad stuff so we frow it in the bin and ferget about it just do good things Gods way sin leads to all kinds of trubble in life chuck anything from satan in the garbage can where it belongs. by james christian

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Date: 3/23/2009 12:29:00 PM
well done James i like how you put a capital I in sIn because it reminds us that we have to forget about I, and think of others, especialy God, we can do all things through him who gives us strength, so when the enemy tries to tell him we carnt do this we carnt do that we not good enough we now we can because God says we can, I CAN is mucher better than i carnt i wont i sharnt, i want to do things my way, this is a good little poem and its not always easy throwing sin in the garbage
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Date: 3/23/2009 12:29:00 PM
But with Gods' help we can do just that, take caqre love mum
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Date: 3/23/2009 11:26:00 AM
wow very well done
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