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Sin City

This city is angry, A city in rage, This city is burning, Page by page, This city is envy, This city is greed, In this city,havoc, Death and corruption breed.... In this city,its dark, Poorly lit light, Everything wrong, Nothing goes right, Souls wanting to be saved, Screaming in the night, It shivers my body, My mind, in fright.... Cant stay in this city, Have to find GOD, Leaving Sin City, Packing my bag.......

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Brian Pierre-Alexander

Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 AM

You might just be my favorite poet...you're good keep it flowing my brother.

Richard Palmer
Date: 11/19/2012 7:26:00 AM

THANKS BRIAN,HONORED,I WILL

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/1/2012 7:38:00 PM

Awesome from start to finish,,,, I think I;m jealous ;} have a blessed day Richard.

Richard Palmer
Date: 10/2/2012 11:40:00 AM

lol don't be,thanks Debbie

Angelica Grier

Date: 8/11/2012 8:45:00 PM

Outstanding poem. Love the ambiguity.

Richard Palmer
Date: 8/12/2012 3:27:00 PM

thanks much Angie

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason

Date: 6/14/2012 5:50:00 PM

Dear Richard, Excellent poem,filled with insight.Best wishes,Tracy.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/14/2012 11:02:00 PM

thanks Tracy,oxox

Philip Souza

Date: 6/11/2012 2:25:00 PM

Wow,That is a nice piece of work,you write so well ! thanks for sharing

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/11/2012 4:47:00 PM

thanks Philip,I give it my best.....

Keisha Davis

Date: 6/7/2012 3:03:00 PM

love it..so true

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/7/2012 4:56:00 PM

thanks Keisha,it is

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/7/2012 12:12:00 AM

I was staitioned in this city for three years just prior to 1960. Population 100, 000 and 90,000 of them were prostitutes. There was an air force base one the coastal bluff overlooking russia. There was a hugh japanese army base just outside of town. There was a small American army security agency inside the confines of the japanese base. We were fenced off inside of their fence. Unfortunately we couldn't leave japan and it was really tiresome staying on base.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/7/2012 8:05:00 AM

thanks for sharing a little history,grateful for the info Charles

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/6/2012 9:46:00 AM

WOW! Richard this is really good. I like it. I think we should all start packing and get out before it's too late. Thanks for reading. A Woman Stood On The Rocks. I just posted part II. Thanks for sharing your poem. Lucilla

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/6/2012 9:50:00 AM

i think so tooo,loved your poem,gonna see part 11 should be a blast....