Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Limerick

Sin

Such food made the people go crazy.
Their hearts Fill'd with lust all got hazy
In bad stuff they were in
Many died cuz of sin
And were lost for'ver and that's crazy!


Dorian Petersen Potter
Aka ladydp2000
Copyright@2014


September 8,2014

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Tim Smith September 8, 2014 at 3:58 AM Excellent limerick Dorian...... Hugs Tim Dorian Petersen Potter September 8, 2014 at 4:31 AM Thank you so much Tim! Glad that you liked it my friend :) Hugs! xxxxxx D