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SIN-RYU

A sh**load of sparrows Dancing on the wires Spots on my truck A howling of leashes Domesticated torture A cat hisses A cacophony of phrases A drumming of woodpeckers Shouting – quiet please Unopened flowers A menagerie of metaphor Optical conclusions

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Date: 7/26/2024 7:31:00 AM
Hello John, You made me smile as I read your well inked senryu! I have parked under wires and trees to my dismay when I returned. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/25/2024 6:16:00 PM
Love that last line - 'optical conclusions,' indeed! Great stuff, John.
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