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Simultaneity

Our love, it's a double poem, a simultaneous poetry ... I write in you, and you write in me, so when we love, we read each other ....!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2019 8:10:00 AM

The praise below is well warranted. I enjoyed your poem very much.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/10/2019 1:52:00 PM

A very well duplicated written poem Alkas. As a side note, I'm a great fan of Thomas Jerfferson, and it seems he was the first to use a machine he made that connected his pen with that of an exact other; so when he wrote, his duplicate hand wrote exactly what he did. Both he, and YOU are amazing Alkas. Thank you.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 9/11/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank my friend, not so much, but i i feel good with your comment, salute alkas

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/10/2019 7:50:00 AM

Wowo, Alkas! So well written. So much love in so few lines. Outstanding, Panagiota

Alkas Poetry
Date: 9/11/2019 3:48:00 PM

Thank you my friend for your kind comment, salute alkas