Simply Just Date Her

Picture Promt Paradox Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Margarita Lillico

Mother said son please be wise
Don't lose yourself in her eyes
Simply just date her
Lest some time later
Comes an unexpected surprise!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 6:03 PM
Lol. I like this one.
Achara Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Don’t lose yourself in her eyes…lol…danger…see the fire!
Achara Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Yep!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 8:24 AM
hahaha I've not seen the contest or the picture prompt, but I dont think i need to with wonderful limerick!:-) hugs jan xx
Achara Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 10:44 AM
I am happy that the Limerick made you laugh. The fact that you haven't seen the contest or the picture prompt speaks well of my little ditty.
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