Simply Her

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Her simply. Her intensely, my world. Her a peach. Her juices singing a melody. Her cooling, to my burning hot. Her trickled out my lips, on my chin. Her smears my flesh. Her lingers. Her just a taste Her! 04~12~2014 Maurice Yvonne

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 10:10:00 PM

now THIS is the kind of free verse I really love to see from you. Short, sweet and singing with very interesting imagery.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/4/2014 10:05:00 PM

very beautifully painted maurice

Jan Allison

Date: 12/4/2014 5:15:00 PM

I adored the cute picture and think the person in your poems is incredibly luck - how many ladies are now wishing it was about 'her'

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2014 5:25:00 PM

I think many more - they were just too shy to comment Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/4/2014 1:57:00 PM

Delicious!

David Meade

Date: 12/4/2014 1:01:00 PM

I would really like to meet her!! Very enticing, you can taste the sweet juices of love in this poem my dear friend. I liked the way you tied in the concept Simply -- with a simple style form -- it all plays together wonderfully! I'm off to find a peach!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/4/2014 12:58:00 PM

I really like this....you're such a romantic man. Lovely