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Simply Her

Her simply. Her intensely, my world. Her a peach. Her juices singing a melody. Her cooling, to my burning hot. Her trickled out my lips, on my chin. Her smears my flesh. Her lingers. Her just a taste Her! 04~12~2014 Maurice Yvonne
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Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 10:10 PM
now THIS is the kind of free verse I really love to see from you. Short, sweet and singing with very interesting imagery.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 10:05 PM
very beautifully painted maurice
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 5:15 PM
I adored the cute picture and think the person in your poems is incredibly luck - how many ladies are now wishing it was about 'her'
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 5:25 PM
I think many more - they were just too shy to comment Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Delicious!
Meade Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 1:01 PM
I would really like to meet her!! Very enticing, you can taste the sweet juices of love in this poem my dear friend. I liked the way you tied in the concept Simply -- with a simple style form -- it all plays together wonderfully! I'm off to find a peach!
Manassian Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 12:58 PM
I really like this....you're such a romantic man. Lovely
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