Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

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Simply Entranced

The slow motion of his gait
changes then quickens like a rainstorm--
I drop my gossamer, thin scarf unknowingly

Beguiled by such mystery, 
his spell...my awe imparting an essence
 of hanging anticipation.

Disquised as formless shadow or reality
I become delirious , like nymph of wind
puzzled by this sheer moment,
my curious mind  invariably entranced. 


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~Free verse is one of my top 3 poetry forms~

10/31/2015

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Terry O'Leary November 3, 2015 at 12:38 PM Congratulations on your win on this fine poem!!

Frederic Parker November 2, 2015 at 3:38 PM Oh the times and places spent..congratulations on your win my poetic friend.

Jan Allison November 2, 2015 at 2:01 PM Absolutely beautiful nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi November 2, 2015 at 12:22 PM Hi nette: A beautiful love story and a great win.

Balveen Cheema November 2, 2015 at 11:59 AM Congrats on your great win, Nette!

Skat A November 2, 2015 at 11:45 AM Nette, awesome win. SKAT

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 2, 2015 at 9:55 AM Congratulations in your win.

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2015 at 4:21 PM I can see why you like it so much. Do tell, what are the other two, Nette!!

Harry Horsman November 1, 2015 at 4:39 AM nette, you astound one with your classical poetry, and it just keeps on getting better and better. Love this, and the form too!

Anne Rutherford October 31, 2015 at 3:50 PM Beautiful poem Nette, I too like the last line the most. Anne.

Kp Nunez October 31, 2015 at 1:53 PM Poetic sensuality at its best! You always wow, Nette. hugs!

Liam Mcdaid October 31, 2015 at 11:53 AM very beautifully painted nette excellent pen dear pal wishing you a lovely weekend

Matthew Anish October 31, 2015 at 12:01 AM Liked the last line the most. Very sensuous write! Thanks for you kind words. Peace &Love Matthew Anish

Brian Strand October 30, 2015 at 9:31 PM Thank you Nette for your always encouraging comments.Best wishes with your creative endeavours.regards Brian

Cherl Dunn October 30, 2015 at 6:16 PM Dear Nette Wow what a erotic sensual write here my friend, it is nature gone wild and sensual on the passionate side of humanity awesome imagery of two lovers, shedding their inhibitions and yielding unto their primitive sides, great job, been their lol won't say how though OMG, two personal thank you also for commenting on my poem also, chat with you later, cheri

Charmaine Chircop October 30, 2015 at 5:58 PM Passionate ,Sensual and Sizzling dear Nette.

Thomas Martin October 30, 2015 at 4:33 PM Lovely, Nette! A quick 7 and thanks for letting me know of the editing.Really enjoyed this wondrous poem!

Jajosh Ongado October 30, 2015 at 4:20 PM Darn girl! Softly sizzling; it is just a killer! That's poetic appeal, Nette. And thank you for your wishes.

Carly Lalion October 30, 2015 at 4:10 PM OMG! So passionate and warm with subliminal imagery. That wildcat gave this brilliant poem it's soft-raw touch. Bravo!