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Simplicity In Vogue

A simple aspect this is, but then I believe the finest sight seen today! The application of old folk shuffling on by in life’s juncture ‘Holding Hands’. © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/25/2010 1:37:00 PM

enjoyed reading this poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2010 10:29:00 PM

Hey, I once wrote on this same topic with an etheree. It's very nice, harry. congrats. I like this form you chose. Luv, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/17/2010 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations you your sweet poem being in the winner's circle Harry.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Harry in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest " Forms of Poetry 101". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/17/2010 7:52:00 AM

congrats on your win with this lovely piece

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 7:20:00 AM

So happy to see this touching choka in the winners' circle, Harry. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/17/2010 6:39:00 AM

I so agree with you here. A sight to behold, old folds holding hands. Great Choka, Harry! However I'm counting 6 syllables in the 5th line. Perhaps replacing "old" with golden brings it to 7. :) Thanks for sharing your observation and thank you for your comments on mine today. Caroline.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/17/2010 6:37:00 AM

Hi Harry, my congrats too on your win! I enjoyed the read this afternoon of your Choka! And thank you for all your friendly comments!...Have a nice week!...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2010 9:44:00 PM

I see you won in the contest. this is nicely done. I really like your theme.LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 9:20:00 PM

Congrats on the win, harry

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/16/2010 9:08:00 PM

Another great one in the short form venue. I love it. Its a sweet piece. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2010 8:49:00 PM

Luv this one Harry.. congrats on your big win in the Forms of Poetry 101 contest.. a wonderful new form and great new poem.. now a winner .. and your enjoy more success .. my friend.. with luv from Italy.. caio..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2010 12:00:00 PM

Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Harry. Love, Carol

De R

Date: 8/16/2010 8:05:00 AM

I never tried this form before, it's kinda interesting...loved your choka. Good luck in the contest:) Emily

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2010 7:47:00 AM

Once when I was younger, I saw my grandparents walking down the street hand-in-hand. It gave me hope that this is what love should lead to -- lasting bliss. Your choka is lovely and brought me a wonderful memory, Harry. Best wishes in Constance's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2010 7:11:00 AM

What a beautiful sight to see Harry.. and a great form the Choka.. good luck in the contest.. I wrote a Nonet..first time..then I wrote another for another contest.. the forms are catchy.. my friend.. super duper write.. with luv from Italy..caio..

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/15/2010 10:37:00 PM

nice one, good luck in the contest