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Simplicity

Simplicity, Oh how sweet you are. Feel thy river flow into the thoughts Not to overtake them, but to merely visit. Give a sweet moment of rest. Overflow into the deep crevices of complexity. Fill them with cool refreshing peace. Rhythmically, revisit the familiar banks Gently wear away accumulated sediments. Weary days are long past. Simplicity, shine upon these eyes. Show clearly what must be cherished most. Enlighten the soul with wisdom. Intensify love toward God and His creations. Shine bright when life's distractions offer many paths. Let love embrace thee, and be filled with joy. Simplicity. Do you hear the cry? Is it true? You do not exist I choose simplicity, fantasy and all. Posted for Brian's One Up contest. (But I was too late to enter it.) Written about Fall of 2003 (Before I was keeping writing dates.) Decided to Enter it in Brian's A Poem from Thee contest. This is from me! Smiles.

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Date: 7/4/2011 12:24:00 PM
I think many long for simplicity these days. Thank you for sharing your insight with us. Karen
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Date: 6/27/2011 4:04:00 PM
simplicity comes with many years of trust and knowing what comes next.
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Date: 6/25/2011 11:02:00 AM
Hooray for simplicity, a dying condition. "Let love embace thee, and be filled with joy." What could be more simply stated. Brian missed a good one here. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:13:00 PM
Hugs hugs hugs XXXX a smooch attack! Light & Love
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Date: 6/17/2011 5:25:00 PM
I guess you and I were born in the wrong time period, Dane. Give me the old horse and buggy days and I'd be much happier. Sometimes life just gets so hectic and I know taking care of your grandsons has had you very busy lately. If we ever do get to the Everglades, simplicity of nature will surround us. Love you, Carolyn
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 6/18/2011 12:40:00 PM
I am still dreaming of a return trip to the beautiful Everglades...Maybe I can get away in the fall.
Date: 6/17/2011 12:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Dane Ann. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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