Simple Simon

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fontanel invites, grace in-pours crown, oh hermit, the secret door worldly wise souls, haven’t a clue simple Simon alone gets through imbibing boundless bliss galore 24-July-2021 DOORS Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/24/2021 1:07:00 AM

Simplicity does not mean ignorance but most faith in the One Being.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/24/2021 5:04:00 AM

Simplicity = purity of heart. First draft of poem was clearer, then I decided to go with this version.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/24/2021 12:25:00 AM

A great quintile. The secrets of joy and peace are for the simplest of hearts. High thoughts.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/24/2021 5:02:00 AM

Fontanel or crown chakra corresponds to the Sahasrara - 1000 petaled lotus. It connects mind-body with universal consciousness. Abundant information on internet