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Simple Pleasures

Cotton candy clouds at sunset Star lit skies at darkest night Yellow moons in the heaven My hand in yours held tight . Small verdant hands that say hello To creatures great and small God’s gentle breath stirring them Until their time to fall . Ladybugs and lightening bugs Inch worms here and there Wooly bears and wondrous things Our time to watch, so rare. And in the blue, birds call and coo Looking for their mate They soar, they spy, they swoop, then say Fly home, the day is late. But not for us we say with joy Our time has just begun We walk, we dream, we speak of life And all the things we’ve done. While in the quiet of the night The rabbits romp and play For a moment silent and still Our love to last, I pray. Behold the wonders near and far Keep them in your heart The simple pleasures we have shared From these we shall not part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/6/2020 3:24:00 PM
Lovely piece Louise.
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Date: 6/12/2020 1:42:00 PM
Louise - I hope you return someday - you are so wonderful with imagery and phrasing, and you seem to enjoy Rhyme as I do ... this new short-line Free Verse that everyone is going to turns me off. Oh, some of it is done very well, but it has no form, and Rhyme will always be my favorite. You have talent, and I pray wherever you are, you are using it. Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
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Date: 11/18/2019 11:14:00 AM
Well, I've never commented on your poems, silly me. But we've been friends for some time and I was there urging you to put this up. So I should say instead, I love this poem and have both a great deal of pride in your poetry as well as faith in your ability. Glad you're here Red, Jess.
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Louise Kwalton
Date: 12/8/2019 6:31:00 PM
Oh Jess, You've no idea how much your words mean to me. With all my heart I thank you.
Date: 10/30/2019 7:04:00 PM
I want to take this opportunity to thank all of you for your encouragement and complements. I’ve been away for quite a while as I am pursuing a career as a watercolorist. I’ve not painted in several years. Last year My daughter asked me to paint something for my granddaughter’s nursery. A few months later I started painting again. There’s been so much interest I couldn’t pass up the opportunity. However I do hope to get back to writing very soon. Being a HSP, feelings must be expressed.
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Date: 10/30/2019 6:49:00 PM
Lovely piece Louise, so well penned with good rhyme and flow too.This makes a rather nice read indeed. Have a great day, Gordon
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Date: 10/28/2019 12:42:00 PM
Such a sweet poem with such a profound message Louise!!
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Date: 6/27/2019 10:25:00 PM
This is so charming and poignant, and the flow and phrasing brightens it up even more ... wonderful write, I'm adding to my favs! And many thanks for your comment on my poem - I apologize for taking so long to reply, as I am way behind of late. Blessings, my friend - I hope you are still among us! :o) <3
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Date: 6/9/2019 5:45:00 PM
Hello Louis kwalton, so nice to meet you. A beautiful created love poem for young lovers. have a nice evening my friend.
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Louise Kwalton
Date: 6/15/2019 7:14:00 AM
Darlene, thank you, it was actually written for a couple with 20 years age difference between them.
Date: 5/21/2019 9:18:00 AM
Louise, lovely message. Love, life and blessings are all around us. We just have to notice. Excellent use of alliteration throughout this gem of a poem. A Fav for me. Welcome to the Soup! ~Mark
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/22/2019 3:16:00 PM
Rhyme is fine, Louise. My first few poems were labeled as "I don't know" when I joined the Soup :) ~Mark
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Louise Kwalton
Date: 5/22/2019 1:50:00 PM
Mark, thank you. It’s funny that you mention the alliteration because I didn’t know how to qualify the poem whether it be that or rhyme. I find it very difficult to decide under which category my poems belong! Once again thank you so much .

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