Constance La France Poet Free verse

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Simple Mutterings- a Memory

ducks  g l i d i n g  on a pond
a weeping willow tree touching the blue
   a park of green and benches in rows
     a blue sky above
white clouds  f l o a  t i n g  by
        tadpoles swimming at the edge
why do I remember this . . .  
                          after all these years
with tears
     as I stood a little girl
                 holding father's hand

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February 25, 2018


Poetry/Free Verse/Simple Mutterings/A Memory
Copyright Protected, ID 18-9982-09-01
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Gregory Richard Barden February 28, 2018 at 12:30 AM Gorgeous imagery and delightful theme ... adore this one, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3 Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:34 AM Greg, thank you for the gorgeous and the compliment ~

Jesse Day February 26, 2018 at 10:32 AM Love the vivid imagery in your writing - I find a fascinating aura of awe surrounding your work. Jesse Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:35 AM Jessi, thank you for the nice comment ~

Beautiful Scars February 26, 2018 at 7:55 AM aww how sweet! There's nothing like your daddy...lovely poem sweet lady :)-luloo Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:35 AM Laura, thank you for the nice comment ~

Ravi Sathasivam February 25, 2018 at 10:26 PM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:36 AM Ravi, thank you for the excellent ~

Tom Cunningham February 25, 2018 at 1:41 PM A lovely verse BW ,how a place ,music or smell can make those happy memories surface. Tom Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:36 AM Tom, thank you for the lovely ~

Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2018 at 1:13 PM So beautiful! Images stick in our minds like frozen paintings! Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:36 AM Kim, thank you for the beautiful ~

Rhoda Tripp February 25, 2018 at 11:52 AM Awww... what a beautiful memory is painted here with such vivid color. Great write, Constance. Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:37 AM Rhoda, thank you for the visit and the compliment ~

Jan Allison February 25, 2018 at 11:46 AM Aww such wonderful vivid memories Constance :-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM Jan, thank you for the wonderful and the hugs ~

Heidi Sands February 25, 2018 at 11:29 AM Very nice BW. I felt like I was there seeing it. Well written :) Constance La France March 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM Heidi, thank you for visiting and for the compliment ~