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Simple Lines

The artist captures the sublime
Upon the page in simple lines

A flower, statue, standing tree
A stallion, child – a chickadee

The artist works in simple ways
To illustrate what he portrays  

And seeks with easy hand to show
The essence of the subject’s glow

And thereby offer for display
The wonder that he sees each day – 

So, too, the poet as he writes
Reveals his wisdom and insights

In simple phrases, simple words
Expressed in lines of simple verse – 

And though the poet would proclaim
The artist has the better claim

For having pictures tell the tale
Where words alone would not avail

Yet both agree – what best defines
And forms the view they had in mind

Is captured – best – in simple lines
Distilled to render the sublime –

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Date: 4/16/2023 7:10:00 PM
Love the classic feel of your sublime lines, John! ~ Gershon
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John Oldham
Date: 4/17/2023 7:17:00 AM
Glad to hear, Gershon! Thanks!
Date: 4/15/2023 6:16:00 PM
This is excellent, John. I love this one:) A pleasure to read you this evening.
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John Oldham
Date: 4/16/2023 11:15:00 AM
Thnks, Daniel! All good - ! Best, john

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