Simple

A simple hello
A simple smile
A simple

"I'll see you in a little while"

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Poet Destroyer A

October 27, 2013 at 10:30 AM

Lara, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = Linda

Skat A

October 27, 2013 at 1:19 AM

Lara, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

Skat A

September 20, 2013 at 7:25 AM

Lara, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Just That Archaic Poet

September 19, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Let me also extend a warm welcome to you, Lara. I love the brevity and simplicity of this piece. It's wonderful when a skilled poet can say so much with just a few words. Kudos! Look forward to reading more from you! :)

Poet Destroyer A

September 19, 2013 at 5:31 AM

a nice little smile, Lara -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 19, 2013 at 2:11 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Lara! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

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