Simon's Story - Part 2

There were several women nearby who were crying and wailing over  this condemned 
man. The convicted man turned slowly towards them and that was the first time Simon heard 
him speak. 
     Breathlessly, the convict stopped and quietly spoke to these lamenting women. Simon 
stopped with him under the weight of the beam. Simon never understood these words at that 
time, .. but he never forgot them. This blood soaked, ravaged dirty half dead man turned to 
the women and rasped ,…
      “Daughters of Jerusalem, do not weep for Me …but weep for yourselves and your 
children.“  He caught his breath, wiped the dust and blood from his eyes with the ragged 
sleeve of his torn robe and continued…“For indeed the days are coming in which 
they will say, “Blessed are the barren, wombs that never bore, and breasts which never 
nursed!” 
     The crowd had already become silent to hear what the accused was saying, because this 
kind of talk was unheard of in a time when bearing children and mother hood was considered 
extremely holy and a gift directly from God Himself. It was proof that he must have been 
possessed! 
     He continued , blood dripping from swollen lips, “Then they will begin to say to the 
mountains, “Fall on us!!” and to the hills, “Cover us!!” …“For if they do these things While I 
am with you,…what will they do when I am gone?” …… The sound of a lash slapped across his 
torn bloody back and he shuffled forward but not before looking directly into Simon’s  eyes.. 
The crowd again took up their noisy, morbid mission. 
     Simon grunted under the weight of the beam and thought they all sounded like a pack of 
hungry jackals. He was certainly confused and inexplicably terrified. 
     After that gruesome unholy nightmare ended and for the rest of his life while walking the 
hills, he kept hearing and was haunted by this man’s words over and over and wondered 
what on earth they could mean.   
     “ Do not weep for Me…but weep for yourselves and your children…for indeed the days 
are coming in which they will say, “Blessed are the barren, wombs that never bore, and 
breasts which never nursed!!”......
     This, to the people of his time was impossible! Children were a holy gift from God himself. 
Blessed are the wombs that never bore...and breasts that never nursed?! What could he 
have meant?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/22/2011 5:32:00 PM
One can't imagine the horrow of that time but thankfully there was a resurrection and He lives today. What treasures to find when I look!
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:14:00 AM
Well written, as always, Robert. Another perspective from A Course in Miracles, wherein the one crucified gave to correct the record of the meaning of his life and death. chapter 27, sect. I-A Picture of Crucifixion, p. 5: “Now in the hands made gentle by His touch, the Holy Spirit lays a picture of a different you. It is a picture of a body still, for what you really are cannot be seen nor pictured. Yet this one has not been used for purpose of attack, and therefore never suffered pain at all.
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:13:00 AM
Continued: "Show this unto your brother, who will see that every scar is healed, and every tear is wiped away in laughter and in love. And he will look on his forgiveness there, and with healed eyes will look beyond it to the innocence that he beholds in you. Here is the proof that he has never sinned; that nothing which his madness bid him do was ever done, or ever had effects of any kind.
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Date: 3/14/2010 11:52:00 PM
Conclusion: "That no reproach he laid upon his heart was ever justified, and no attack can ever touch him with the poisoned and relentless sting of fear. Attest his innocence and not his guilt. Your healing is his comfort and his health because it proves illusions are not true. It is not will for life but wish for death that is the motivation for this world. Its only purpose is to prove guilt real. No worldly thought or act or feeling has a motivation other than this one."
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Date: 3/14/2010 7:58:00 AM
Awesome write Robert. Blessed are thoes that understand and receive the Agape Gift presented to mankind that day. And receive and manifest it's Being in the world for humans to witness. Good write Robert. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 7:07:00 AM
Much food for thought, Robert. Our times seem to have lost perspective. Did Yeats say, "Lost all conviction." Someone said it not so long ago, and then your someone said it, knew it was coming 2000 years ago. Great wakeup call! BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:38:00 AM
ABORTION...it must now be clear! Excellent write...tears are welling in my eyes for the many unborn spirits, once waiting to be born, but instead ripped from life and transported directly into eternity without knowing...without growing...without reading God's word...without a mortal history. As it was written.
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:38:00 PM
Great Faith write...Very uplifting..Keep the faith pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:16:00 PM
enjoyed inspirational work!!
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Date: 3/13/2010 12:01:00 PM
So well written! In the year 70, Jerusalem was surrounded by the Romans No food was allowed in and the people starved to death. That is what Jesus meant.
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Date: 3/13/2010 11:45:00 AM
After reading both parts, I am struck by your amazing ability to write this story, and the passionate faith it holds. You are a wonderful narrator, and as Jeralynn said, it is timeless. Beautifully written, Robert. Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/13/2010 10:32:00 AM
Beautiful prose Robert...timeless........ Jeralynn
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