Simon's Story - Part 1

He was a rugged looking fellow, black hair cropped a little shorter than most under his 
dirty skull cap. His hair graying a little at the sideburns of his beard, betraying his unknown 
age.  No matter how many times he walked these hills Simon was always awed by their 
beauty. This occasion coming back from helping his brother's family in the hill country of 
Cyrene with their herd of sheep, was no different. It was usually a quiet and peaceful walk, 
accompanied by the sounds of nature and the occasional distant sounds of bells tingling from 
the necks of wayward sheep.  
     This time as he neared the city, it was different. There was noise and lots of it. A crowd 
of people slowly making their way up a worn dusty trail , disturbing the usual peace with 
jeering, crying , cursing and drunken yelling. He could hear it echoing across the rock strewn 
hills.  This certainly had a feeling of impending doom about it. His curiosity peaking, he 
veered his course in that direction and broke his way through the chaos of the crowd to see 
what it was all about. 
     It was as he feared...an execution…Roman style. The man bent in travail under the 
heavy cross beam was a bloody mess. They must have really hated this one! It was hard to 
imagine what he could have done to deserve this. His clothes were torn and bloody. You 
couldn’t see the features of his face because of too much blood oozing from the basket 
looking mesh of thorns jabbed into his skull and tangled in his hair. 
     Apparently this poor culprit couldn’t take it any more and fell.. hard ..into the dust and 
rocks of the path with the cross beam pinning him down. Simon was struck dumb with all the 
hate and sorrow concentrated here so close to the holy city. He turned quickly in disgust to 
leave this man made hell when an armored guard poked the handle of a spear into his ribs 
and yelled at him to help the convict! He hurriedly picked up the beam allowing the poor man 
to get to his feet and continue with the morbid procession. 
  ----- continued in part 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/14/2010 8:04:00 AM
Awesome write Robert, I'll continue to part 2. Robert this is an awesome rehash of the Agape stash that humanity has as God's gift within our sacred hearts. If only more people would wake up to this awesome truth. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:30:00 AM
Oh my, Robert...(I know the rest, but I'm captured by your words. So, I'm off to part 2.) Your love shows!
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:14:00 PM
enjoyed on to part two!!
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Date: 3/13/2010 10:35:00 AM
Dear Robert, it is in our embrace of this history that we experience the "Passion" of the time. Incredible write, prose, and content. Love Jeralynn
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