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Simon's Story - Part 1

He was a rugged looking fellow, black hair cropped a little shorter than most under his dirty skull cap. His hair graying a little at the sideburns of his beard, betraying his unknown age. No matter how many times he walked these hills Simon was always awed by their beauty. This occasion coming back from helping his brother's family in the hill country of Cyrene with their herd of sheep, was no different. It was usually a quiet and peaceful walk, accompanied by the sounds of nature and the occasional distant sounds of bells tingling from the necks of wayward sheep. This time as he neared the city, it was different. There was noise and lots of it. A crowd of people slowly making their way up a worn dusty trail , disturbing the usual peace with jeering, crying , cursing and drunken yelling. He could hear it echoing across the rock strewn hills. This certainly had a feeling of impending doom about it. His curiosity peaking, he veered his course in that direction and broke his way through the chaos of the crowd to see what it was all about. It was as he feared...an execution…Roman style. The man bent in travail under the heavy cross beam was a bloody mess. They must have really hated this one! It was hard to imagine what he could have done to deserve this. His clothes were torn and bloody. You couldn’t see the features of his face because of too much blood oozing from the basket looking mesh of thorns jabbed into his skull and tangled in his hair. Apparently this poor culprit couldn’t take it any more and fell.. hard ..into the dust and rocks of the path with the cross beam pinning him down. Simon was struck dumb with all the hate and sorrow concentrated here so close to the holy city. He turned quickly in disgust to leave this man made hell when an armored guard poked the handle of a spear into his ribs and yelled at him to help the convict! He hurriedly picked up the beam allowing the poor man to get to his feet and continue with the morbid procession. ----- continued in part 2

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Date: 3/14/2010 8:04:00 AM
Awesome write Robert, I'll continue to part 2. Robert this is an awesome rehash of the Agape stash that humanity has as God's gift within our sacred hearts. If only more people would wake up to this awesome truth. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:30:00 AM
Oh my, Robert...(I know the rest, but I'm captured by your words. So, I'm off to part 2.) Your love shows!
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:14:00 PM
enjoyed on to part two!!
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Date: 3/13/2010 10:35:00 AM
Dear Robert, it is in our embrace of this history that we experience the "Passion" of the time. Incredible write, prose, and content. Love Jeralynn
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