Simon Takes Me For a Walk

When I go hiking with my dog,
(let's get that straight, my husband's dog,)
I find that Simon knows no path.
He wants to roam about in yards
which leaves our neighbors in a flap.

This dog has taught me how to jog,
he likes to chase both squirrel and frog.
I like to stop and catch my breath.
Hiking with Simon? very hard
until his run is under wraps.


He's fairly gentle with young tykes,
his boundless love of kids on trikes
finds random riders on our street.
crossing back and forth, side to side
to his delight.  He loves to dance.

He tucks his tail to show dislikes
but says, "Hello!" as leg he hikes
at every mailbox that we meet.  
With friendliness oversupplied,
each female dog, he will romance.


Back to his barking which is loud
to say the least when in a crowd.
Behind fences, standing at doors
all dogs compete, sharing their yelp
and when they tire they share their moan.

Jerking his leash is not allowed
he slips his head out, looking proud
racing away, commands ignored.
Efforts to catch will not help;
leave him alone, he'll head on home.


Jan. 13, 2015
AW-064

Sponsor	BJ Legros Kelley
Contest Name	Beloved Pets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Are you off for another run??? Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 12:36 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Reason, and congratulations on your Glory placing win! :)
A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 2:44 PM
REASON, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Many congrats on your win Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work about Simon..Dachshunds are strong willed, stubborn, and hard to house break but they are adorable in other ways..Ashley our hund is part Chihuahua as well..She is at my house nearly everyday. She is very protective and possessive..Thanks for stopping by.Congrats on this fine winning work. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 12:21 PM
She belongs to my daughter who lives next door..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Congrats on your great win. BG
Poteet Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 6:46 AM
Thank you, Barbara.
Roper Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 4:48 PM
Reason,you made me laugh so hard, good descriptive write, it is so cute. Congratulations on your win and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
Poteet Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 6:25 AM
Glad you found it amusing, when he was younger, there was no gate in our house that could hold him back...he'd climb, chew and charge on through. Appreciate the comment and the rating.
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 4:28 PM
I love your poem about Simon! I feel as though I know all about him! Very nice. Congratulations on your win, Reason! Sandra
Poteet Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Sandra, thanks for the comment and congrats. Simon is 14 now and can barely make it up the one step from the yard; but he still can waddle down the street with glee.
Carmack Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:24 PM
They can be stubborn, one of the reasons I love the breed. I like the form you chose. Congrats and thanks for your entry.
Poteet Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 6:33 AM
thanks Rob, for the placement in your contest. It was an enjoyable, relate-able prompt for me.
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