Simile of a Smile
The whistling winds whip her words away,
the simile of a smile on her lips
fades and is lost in the deepening dusk.
there on the moist, soft sand her footprints melt
with the slow, oncoming tide at his feet,
he's got nothing to say to make her stay.
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