Silver Wassail of Chimes

bird’s beak in stirring melody arouse silver wassail of chimes breathlessly bound to bough to bow at angst of wind reverence of two feet bird’s claws clinging to the true branch unbound bird’s praise of appraisal as Autumn leaves red and golden linger whirligig and arise surly and duly tossed to the cold cruel surface where children wait to kick and stomp throw wings God sees impervious backbone of leaves for it’s all in Fall’s fun the breakdown of compost the trees do not despair wings pet the bark whilst the losing of proverbial hair color inward greening has knowledge of Springtime the songbirds practicing their sunshine tunes its boon

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Date: 9/6/2024 12:53:00 PM
Oh, gosh...I am in tears, Kim, "God sees impervious backbone of leaves"...a fav for me, one of my very favs...one I will come back to and read again and again. Your work is pure emotion.
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Date: 9/5/2024 5:32:00 AM
Dear Kim, What a wonderful creative write! I just love the Autumn and the renewal and rebirth of nature. We are all apart of that process and with us comes hope. "God Sees" and that is the hope that we have. Wonderful and Beautiful Read this morning, Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/4/2024 7:13:00 PM
So many levels of consciousness to enjoy in this fine work. Great wisdom and feeling. Will read again, once cannot capture all the splendor and deep emotive depth. In other words, I like you. You are the best. Brava!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2024 7:58:00 PM
I appreciate you, Joe! :)
Date: 9/4/2024 10:58:00 AM
The wonders of creation Kim, I'm forever in awe of them. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2024 1:31:00 PM
Me too and God is so kind to allow our limited words to express. Hugs
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