Silver Strands

One fine morning the mirror showed some silver strands in my black hair though few in number but very bold started sprouting here and there. For me it was a disadvantage started thinking to get rid of them so that I could hide actual age told my son,'Let's start a new game'. With him soon I made a small deal 'Rupees one for each silver hair, just pluck them off my black head,till no more patches remains there'. Merrily he agreed with that,and whenever wanted to make some quick bucks, used to tell me,'Just lie down dad, I can see some patches to pluck'. Soon those silver strands disappeared son was happy with the bucks he got, but something different started to appear the mirror now shows a big bald spot'. © kash poet ============================== Placement: 5th; (December 2011) Contest:Silver Strands Sponsor:Susan Burch .
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Allen Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Very cute and much fun to read. Huggs TLee
Merryman Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 6:35 PM
Funny, Kash. Congrats on your win. Kim
Puddifoot Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 3:21 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this humorous write :)
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Eastman Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 7:34 AM
LoL. Nature has it's way. Great win. Congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 5:52 AM
ut oh vanity strikes back! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 10:00 PM
Kash, glad to see you on our list. When I read this I was thinking it was funny that the guy ended up with a bald spot. So do you REALLY have a big bald spot?? YOu did wonderfully with this topic. Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Kash, so happy to see it DID do well in the contest and a Big Congratulations to you!
Johnson Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 2:44 PM
So men can be vain too. Congratulations on the win. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 2:33 PM
I thought this was a winner when I first read it. Congratulations
Williams Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Kash congrats on your win, great take on the subject..David
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 10:42 AM
You turned it into a fable of sorts-how unique Kash! A big congrats. to you :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Hey, Kash. I read the poems in the contest today and didn't even know this was yours. I bet it will be on our list. (all depends what Susan thought of it too!) What I like most is the last stanza and what the mirror shows. haha
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:14 PM
This was real cute Kash and is sure to do well in the contest. thanks for your comment on my haiku.
K. Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Hey, don't delete this one, Kash! This is a real fun read-- ha, this reminded me of somebody's story as well...I think Andrea and Susan would enjoy this one---thanks for your nice comments on my poem... and replied to soupmail....
Neels Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 5:35 AM
Gosh, serves you right for not embracing those silver strands hehe.. Love this Kash, good luck for the contest :)
. Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 7:41 PM
LoL! witty and funny, got my silver strands when i started in my 20-ies, yieks! ;p
Song Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 2:20 PM
This has a hint of goofy to it with a sprinkle of hot sauce (plucking of the hair must burn!)! YIKES! I really like the energy of this one, Kash. It sounds as tho the older you become, the richer your son will be....I can just picture you and him in this comical scene.... You know I was only kiddin bout you changin your Avatar for Andrea's poem....gotta have a lil FUN today!!! All the best, Bengali Bro. Gwendolen
Yakubu Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Plug one and get two... Ask for more...
Onclaud Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 9:04 AM
such a clever, smart wriite, kashi buddy.. you make me laugh with this winning entry! :) huggs!
Quigley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 8:22 AM
This is funny Kash. Good luck in the contest
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