Silver Strands

SILVER    STRANDS   

We left the dusty strands of Santander  *
And struck west, seeking Peru, the far shining land,
Our carracks riding high in the water,
Hungry to ground our boats on its silver strand.

Pack mules groaned under their silver load,
Barges of silver threaded the palmed rivers, manned
By dusky Inca slaves on their road
Down to Peru’s glistening silver strand.

Dipping in the warm sea up to our rails,
The holds cracking open with chest and cask
Of gleaming Spanish reales, the creaking sails  * 
Pulling carracks full-laden for the task,

We slipped out of sight of New Spain
And its mines of silver, that silver land,
Glinting hills, glittering cities, far over the Main, *
And said adieu to its coasts and silver strands;

Struck out for Santander, and unfurled
Tall curtained palaces in Aragon and Castile - grand *
And reaching to the sky from the New World  -
That far horizon with its silver strands.
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NOTES
	
*Santander is a big port in Spain

*Spanish money  of the period was counted in   REALES   and was   used everywhere    as currency and as   a reserve store of wealth, like the US dollar today.   In the sixteenth century over 300 tons of silver each year were brought to Spain in fleets of ships  from America.

*The Atlantic Ocean was commonly called the (Spanish)  Main.

*Castile and Aragon  were the two main kingdoms of Iberia 
  which united and became “Spain”. 
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Written for, and entered in, Susan Burch’s Contest  “ Silver Strands”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Congrats on your win, Sidney. Kim
Poet Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Sydney congrats on your win.Very nice poem.
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Eastman Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Wonderful way to learn history. Congratulations on your win. Well earned.
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 5:57 AM
OKies now I am perfectly content lol to be last in this SILVER contest..this is a first place write if i ever saw one! Geeez we should go back to baby-talk Syd! LOL anyone I love ya. Congrad's [You beat me out!] Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 11:38 PM
This is not only good but interesting. Congratulations Sidney
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Sydney, I LOVE the quality writing in this poem. It was one of my favorites in the contest. Very elegant in its depiction of history. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Sydney, I really enjoyed this well written poem filled with intrigue and history. I am partial to silver and not many know it was valued higher than gold in Acient Egypt. Congratulations on your wonderful win and I too would have rated higher. It certainly far outshines my little etheree.
Johnson Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 3:12 PM
I would rate this at the top. Nice history and geography. Well writen quatrain. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Both a beautiful poem and a lesson to boot. Very nice Sidney. Congratulations
Williams Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Sidney congrats on your win, sounds like an incredible journey..David
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 10:26 PM
Sidney, this is beautifully crafted. Susan is adding her scores to mine and posting the results in a day or two. I hope to see you on our list! Your writing is flawless.
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