Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Silver Springs

Silver Springs
Spring break 2009

Devastation by
Hurricane strong winds
Totally shocked when
Eyes viewed the scene
Water still ran clean

Wanted to share joy
Of the fun zoo
With my grandson
And you, grand day

Day saved
Safari
Jeep ride

Emu 
Eggs eggs

There

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Sue Mason August 15, 2009 at 11:23 AM You really like this form and do it very well, Sara! I need to study it more and try one myself ... smile ... there is so much to learn here at the Soup!! Thanks for being here.

Hosea Griffith August 14, 2009 at 6:23 PM Nice poem

James Fraser August 14, 2009 at 4:21 PM Lovely title Sara, very good write. The title is also a beautiful song by Fleetwood Mac, you'll like it, trust me>>The Highlander>>James

Gert W. Knop August 14, 2009 at 3:13 AM Thanks God, you all survived! We had cyclones and I know pretty well what devastation those bring. At least your day was saved. Good example of a Diminished Hexaverse. Gert. Thanks for your comment on Breathless.