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Silver Pennies

The sun shone bright upon the lake The water all a-shimmer. Dazzling in it's beauty, It sparkled and it glimmered. Glinting lights all around Danced before my eyes. It seemed a million silver pennies Had fallen from the sky. All across the lake they played In frivolous delight. Twinkling as they made their way, In a kaleidoscope of light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/24/2017 2:47:00 PM
Breathtaking write. I love the million silver pennies fallen from the sky! :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 5/26/2017 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 5/1/2017 1:02:00 PM
Very nicely written, Gary. As Lenna says, it has a sparkle to it. // +7. // Barry
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Gary Smith
Date: 5/1/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Barry :)
Date: 5/1/2017 8:08:00 AM
nicely explained the surrounding. nice
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Gary Smith
Date: 5/1/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Bisma :)
Date: 4/30/2017 3:03:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this, it has a wonderful "sparkle" to it with clear vision. 7
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/30/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Lenna :)
Date: 4/30/2017 5:38:00 AM
Beautifully written Gary, I can't wait to read more
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/30/2017 3:59:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Jerry :)
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/30/2017 2:22:00 PM
I just came back to read it again thanks Gary for sharing !!!
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Gary Smith
Date: 4/30/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Jerry :)

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