Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Silver Pennies

The sun shone bright upon the lake
The water all a-shimmer.
Dazzling in it's beauty,
It sparkled and it glimmered.

Glinting lights all around
Danced before my eyes.
It seemed a million silver pennies
Had fallen from the sky.

All across the lake they played
In frivolous delight.
Twinkling as they made their way,
In a kaleidoscope of light.

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Heidi Sands May 24, 2017 at 2:47 PM Breathtaking write. I love the million silver pennies fallen from the sky! :) Gary Smith May 26, 2017 at 3:01 AM Thank you Heidi :)

Barry Stebbings May 1, 2017 at 1:02 PM Very nicely written, Gary. As Lenna says, it has a sparkle to it. // +7. // Barry Gary Smith May 1, 2017 at 1:46 PM Thank you Barry :)

Bisma Bakhtawer May 1, 2017 at 8:08 AM nicely explained the surrounding. nice Gary Smith May 1, 2017 at 11:44 AM Thank you Bisma :)

Lenna Walker April 30, 2017 at 3:03 PM I really enjoyed reading this, it has a wonderful "sparkle" to it with clear vision. 7 Gary Smith April 30, 2017 at 3:08 PM Thank you Lenna :)

Jerry T Curtis April 30, 2017 at 5:38 AM Beautifully written Gary, I can't wait to read more Gary Smith April 30, 2017 at 3:59 PM I'm glad you enjoyed it Jerry :) Jerry T Curtis April 30, 2017 at 2:22 PM I just came back to read it again thanks Gary for sharing !!! Gary Smith April 30, 2017 at 10:06 AM Thank you Jerry :)