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Silver Mist

Silver shot mist obscures the moon as it hangs high in the night sky. Radiating its light, only for it to be reflected and fractured. Pitch black is the night, yet also scattered rays highlight things. Bringing a sense of mystic to the still silent night. Orb of silver you enthral as you glide and slide. Forcefully trying to break free and soar once more in open skies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/28/2015 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend penned with beautiful ink. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 11/27/2015 12:41:00 PM
glittering gem of a work, shadow.. thanks for appreciating my piece for your last contest.. huggs
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:25:00 AM
I've never thought of the moon as being held prisoner in Earth's gravity...Great food for thought, Shadow. Well done.
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Date: 11/27/2015 3:25:00 AM
Really nice shadow, You painted a lovely picture here!! I enjoyed this!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/27/2015 3:25:00 AM
- A beautiful view, Shadow - The moon's light is both mysterious and romantic - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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