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Silver and Gold

classy lassie I love…never will I ask her hand in marriage, just poverty stricken Redneck boy…she would turn me down, though I have silver in stars above and gold in the morning sun!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 10:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Poem From Your First 100 On P S" contest Moses. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/17/2011 6:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this wonderful write! Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2011 6:09:00 PM

Congrats Moses on HM for this rare beauty poetry.. luv this one specially the title luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/17/2011 8:42:00 AM

Sadly sweet with melancholy and longing, but a heart of gold. I love this!! Congratulatioins!

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/17/2011 8:20:00 AM

I like the John. Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:23:00 PM

I love this one, john. Congratulations!!

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/6/2011 11:02:00 AM

Big congratulations, John on your first place in Adeleke Adeite's contest. Being poor is a struggle for many, but the wealthy ones don't have, or see " Silver in the stars and gold in the morning." It's very inspirational and moving. Thanks for your comments on my poetry. God bless you. Have a wonderful Sunday. Peace and Love, Andrew.

Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2011 4:18:00 AM

Sensational Sijo, John. Many congrats on your so well deserved FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 8:01:00 PM

oh my,moe! your sweeet sijo is a sure topping on any poetic cake.. my loving cheers for the shining win! :) huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 3:27:00 PM

Brilliant, John! So happy to see your poem take first place. Congratulations, dear friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Rick Parise

Date: 5/5/2011 1:15:00 PM

Excellent write John~ I love it.....written soooo very well.....God bless^Rick

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/4/2011 9:48:00 PM

This is truly the most deserving Moses. Many warm congrats for this win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/4/2011 1:57:00 PM

Just a lovely love poem! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:35:00 PM

Congrats my friend!!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/4/2011 12:55:00 PM

Many congratulations on your wins, John - especially this 1st place spot : )

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/4/2011 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations, a great win. Emma

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/4/2011 12:05:00 PM

Oh so beautiful! Such words that make a Sijo!Congrats John on your top place,very deserving win...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations Moses on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2011 8:44:00 AM

Oh....how quaint is this???!! I love the original twist to this sweet and clever poem!! Kuddos to you John!!!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/4/2011 6:38:00 AM

Thanks John for supporting my contest. This piece caught my attention so much, it's so cute & creative. Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, which you all the best sir. Adeleke

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/4/2011 6:17:00 AM

So well done John..congrats on your big win..BG

Shani Fassbender

Date: 5/4/2011 5:24:00 AM

Big congrats on your first place win - very well done!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/4/2011 4:55:00 AM

YOU R THE CLASSY ONE, JOHN!! Redneck or not, this is great. Congrats on being at the top of the food chain! lol. You are becoming a world class poet. It is great to hear of true love in your prize winning write. HIgh five, my friend! Gwendolen

Cory Long

Date: 5/4/2011 4:39:00 AM

congrats on your win..cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2011 4:38:00 AM

Congrats Moses my friend on your 1st place win in Sweet Sijo contest with this emphatic piece and superb title ... enjoy your top spot luv .. rare beauty indeed..luv..