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Silver A fisherman he went to be to sail the deep blue fickle sea a price on every scale is paid for those who hunt the silver. the sea is cruel as she is kind she does not give her bounty free her tricks are many testing souls of those who hunt for silver. sometimes she sings a lullaby on calm and beauteous nights stars and comets flash the skies a gift to those who hunt her silver. a screaming shrew, claws of ice she haunts the dreams and takes a life to pay the fee for bringing in the silver. in his blood runs her salt never could he leave her a mistress harsh exacting fine from the men who hunt the silver. Dedicated to those who brave the deeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/7/2019 5:48:00 AM
Patricia, your tribute to those who lost their lives in the Tarbert tragedy resonated deeply with that community, and with me. Heartfelt words.
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Date: 5/29/2018 2:46:00 AM
A marvelous tribute to all those brave souls who pit themselves against the tempestuous sea. Superb piece of writing, Patricia! :) john
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:26:00 AM
The silver being fish extraordinary write with so much I can idenrify as I loved going deep sea fishing. Nowhere did I find being alive at the risk of losing it. You seem to have a better understanding . Its gorgeously intimate.
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Date: 2/2/2018 8:55:00 AM
A great dedication to all those seafarers, Patricia, I'm in awe of those pearl-divers, who themselves remain poor, though they jeopardize their very lives for hunting out treasures from the deep...
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Date: 1/29/2018 10:05:00 AM
Love that third stanza, I think many sea men will be able to relate to this one.. Excellent verses...
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Date: 1/29/2018 6:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading how the sea too has feelings for those who depend on it. A lovely tribute to coexistence with nature.
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Date: 1/28/2018 5:39:00 PM
I am sure many fishermen can relate to every line. I live on a little Island and we are at the mercy of the sea in fact the Royal National Lifeboat Association (RLNI) was created after tragedies at sea by the isle of Man:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2018 5:32:00 PM
You must have some first hand experience to write about the sea this well. Really enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/28/2018 5:10:00 PM
Very Nice...There a price to be paid if you can brave the waters of life...All the best Patricia
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