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Silver-Grey

At the dimming of the day, unfriended, by his fire he stands, a warrior of the wasteland body crippled by the elements' cruel hands. Wind-burned and swept his hair is silver-grey, a blend of black and white and every cast between 'til warrior and wasteland are the same. His gaze fastens on the landscape in winter light's slow fade, lakes and mountains stained that silver shade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/8/2012 8:26:00 PM
Keith, I like the way you created a vivid cascade in my mind with all the wonderful and breath taking words in your poem, Well done! I'm eager to read more tomorrow when I log on... good night PD
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Date: 6/30/2012 8:14:00 AM
'til warrior and wasteland are the same. His gaze fastens on the landscape in winter light's slow fade, truly inspired.
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:42:00 AM
this is so full of imagery I can almost touch the scene unfolding!
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Date: 6/23/2012 11:02:00 AM
Brilliant images of the warrior. Thanks for sharing your poem.
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Date: 6/21/2012 8:24:00 PM
you write so incredibly well, Keith!! I hope others see this one.
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