Silhouette of Life

A misty path all through ahead
Quite uncommon, quiet was the way
Moonshine, the guide to his dark forlorn destiny
Marionette played by an unseen unknown.
Enigmatic enjambment, enmeshed he was
Left in the middle of somewhere, alas
New faces, hard facers, these phases are great
His quest for the treasure with no knowledge begun.
All that is left now is a whorl of hope,
To get through the labyrinth, this misanthrope.
One day, the bootless might be well-heeled
The secret lies there he'll say Finally revealed.
Take a look at your past, your awry trail
You never get a second chance and thereby hangs a tale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 5:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Venkat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 29, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Venkat Raman, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
Croft Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 11:19 AM
interesting poem!!! welcome to poetry soup
Raman Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Thanx.. :-)
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February 22, 2011 at 7:27 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Venkat. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:19 AM
Nice expressions on life with nice analogies, Venkat
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