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Silhouette Through opaque darkness, delving in the deep as if to say life’s face we must forget where shadows lurk in silent scenes to keep an image not as bright in silhouette. A blend of varied shades that is unique, can be an outline of the sky’s sunset. Smile-lines upon the face become obscure. Are these emotions sad, proud or demur? A silhouette combines both light and dark, different yet very necessary, a thing of contrast that stands out so stark to form a work of art because they vary. What peace on Earth if people followed art and joining these two hues was customary. An opaque solid color’s all we get. The truth is blocked behind the silhouette. 9/15/17 BRIAN'S CHOICE 8 Brian Strand, Sponsor

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Date: 5/11/2020 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations Janis on this poem filled with imagery as delicate as "opaque darkness." Very lovely.
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Date: 5/10/2020 1:03:00 PM
Congrat on your first place Bravo!
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful, Janis. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/6/2017 1:22:00 AM
Very powerful write that's full of intense imagery and substance ... loved it, Janis! Congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Date: 10/27/2017 11:54:00 PM
I love this poem and I like the analogy too. Profound writing, Janis. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/27/2017 4:55:00 PM
This is so gorgeous, Janis. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/27/2017 4:38:00 PM
An amazing poem, Janis. So deep...so much we cannot see in a silhouette that lurks beneath. Congratulations on your fine placement in this Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/19/2017 7:29:00 PM
what an interesting idea your presented with this poem, Janis. A clever and unique poem.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/12/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 9/19/2017 7:10:00 PM
Very deep poem, Janis. Truly a thinking poet's poem. Classic existential poetry. Placed in the fave file for sure. Excellent write! Love and many blessings of joy.
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie.

Book: Shattered Sighs