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At first you were a shadow in the dark where shadows never lurk, but there you were, a bah relief of black on black, an arc cast by the beating of a heart that stirs from fonts of hope eternal, as a lark trills in the daylight when my senses purr and keep on swooning when the lapis grows to wed an onyx mate in true love's throes. But then your shadow moved across my gaze to take my breath and throw it to the night just as my heart leapt in an endless maze of crimson thoughts and nuptial jitters white until you kissed my lips in breezeful phrase and disappeared in coming silver light. When I awoke before a dawn unseen I wept for my zephyrous shadow queen. 4th Place Silhouette Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish 9/9/17

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Date: 9/17/2017 9:32:00 PM
Wonderful writing Dale, unique word pairings "crimson thoughts" excellent form and execution!
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:12:00 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win, Dale ... Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:31:00 PM
Full of thoughts that tease the imagination Dale. Wonderful use of enjambment. The rhyme is not at all forced and used to enhance and not distract. Impressive writing
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/16/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Craig!
Date: 9/15/2017 4:05:00 PM
This is very well written. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:21:00 PM
Very well written Greg filled with imagery of the shadows. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/10/2017 11:30:00 AM
Lovely words...nuptial jitters, zephrous shadow queen. Well done! GL in contest, Dale!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/10/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim.
Date: 9/9/2017 10:22:00 PM
Well written Ottava rima..well executed!
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Date: 9/9/2017 8:56:00 PM
Beautiful, Dale! GL in contest!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/9/2017 8:58:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 9/9/2017 6:24:00 PM
Beautifully expressed Dale. Your last two lines are amazing! Good luck! :)
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