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Silent Strike

Obsidian velvet
Parts the leaves;
Silent paws impress
The land and in
Moonlit shadows;
A great specter hides.
In one swift flash
Of light and shadow-play,
Panther takes his prey.

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Russell Sivey

July 28, 2017 at 4:42 AM

What a brilliant write! I thought this to be a totally awesome piece, filled with kitty prowess and killer instinct! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning, thank you for posting it! Great Work!!

M. L. Kiser

July 29, 2017 at 3:41 PM

Wow, thanks Russell; I like reading poetry in the mornings with my coffee by my side. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

Jan Allison

July 28, 2017 at 2:53 AM

wow ML this is a perfect description of the night time activities of a big cat I love every line especially the obsidian paws. I'm am adding it to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

July 28, 2017 at 3:53 AM

It wasn't until the final line did I realise it was about a big cat as it applies to smaller pussycats too:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

July 28, 2017 at 3:21 AM

Thank you so much; I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I love the big cats, as much as my little tabby.