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Silent Storm

her finger to his lips, the mood like an eclipse. she’s set the bed so it won’t quake, not yet. her satin gown shifts slowly, like accentuated snowflakes. the moon illuminates the hallowed place. she flickers with the candlelight, bare feet on rose petals, her wrists orchestrating the space above the clouds - a tender dance, sans music. she needs him to hear the deafness of the night, then she can make love to him, as if he knew a world where only lightning can succumb to the pitter-patterless rain; noiseless crackle, the ebony sky with plumes of ziggurats. afterall, she’s wont to create fireworks in the marriage bed; roman candles, catherine wheels, head over heels in love with him, and he hears her. she kisses his tears. he hears her quiet heartbeat. the ornate swan and royal blue, her charms, the twining of vanilla and rose... the honeymooners in vociferous throes. this night of nights — the chamber undulates as her spouse embraces the storm. he craves fidelity*, her infinity. 6/25/2020 Sensuality Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One *state of being faithful; accuracy of details

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Date: 7/5/2020 2:38:00 PM
Sensual moves of love on a moonlit night! Love the scene Kim. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/2/2020 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations! So frisky and sensual.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 7:26:00 AM
So frisky... Thanks, my friend!
Date: 7/1/2020 5:18:00 PM
Very sensual, silence always is.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Date: 6/25/2020 3:17:00 PM
Very sensual and romantic Kim, well written. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2020 5:07:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! :)
Date: 6/25/2020 1:59:00 PM
Ooh La La. Succulent ink. ~x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2020 2:03:00 PM
Oui! Oui! Thank you, sweet Mo!
Date: 6/25/2020 10:37:00 AM
WOW. I just LOVE it. A fave. It's definitely sensual. So beautifully done. Love it so... God bless you with more words and love than you've ever known before.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2020 1:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweetest of friends! God bless you too!

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