Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

Silent Spaces

Where does your imagination take you
A vision in the mirror of my mind
I have let my thoughts out to play
In deep blue seas and the golden skies.
Of silent spaces and a breath taking view
I see myself sitting and talking to the sun
Unquenched desire to hold your light
Stirring up some unknown delight.
A small boat sailing in a deep blue sea
We turn not older with years but newer 
every day glowing in an orange hue
A rising sun in the ocean in me
Wakes me up as moments fly
Releasing me into a limitless sky.

23.1.2021.
Can you imagine
Sponsor- Constance La France (1st Place)

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Jan Allison February 2, 2021 at 4:01 PM what delightful imagery Carol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Carol Mitra February 2, 2021 at 5:06 PM Thanks dear Jan....hugs right back :)

Constance La France January 29, 2021 at 1:28 PM Carol, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this excellent poem, I loved it _Constance Carol Mitra January 29, 2021 at 7:05 PM Thank you Constance.....hugs :)

Unseeking Seeker January 29, 2021 at 5:14 AM Wow! This is beautiful! Congrats on your win! Carol Mitra January 30, 2021 at 1:04 AM Thank you...much appreciated.

Anitha Jayasankar January 28, 2021 at 1:20 AM What a lovely entry. Enjoyed reading. Congrats on your first place win Carol. God bless ~ Ani Carol Mitra January 28, 2021 at 1:25 AM Thanks dear Ani...hugs :)

Beata Agustin January 27, 2021 at 7:21 PM Wow! Congrats! Delighting and delightful. God bless you. Carol Mitra January 27, 2021 at 8:20 PM Thanks Beata...hugs :)

Beryl Edmonds January 27, 2021 at 4:32 PM A lovely place to go to in one’s imagination Carol. A lovely write, congratulations on your 1st place win... Belle Carol Mitra January 30, 2021 at 1:05 AM Thanks Belle...much appreciated :)