Silent Reaction

**Sedoka**


Mechanical hands
Caress her silky smooth back
Legs twitch uncontrollably

For one another
Comes the urge for love making
To deep the friendship, they stop

...Jared Pickett....:JP}
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Good decision! And wonderful poem. It is good to keep those deep friendships. They can last a lifetime. Very nice sedoka. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Interesting. I will have to look up this form and see what it is not sure. I will learn something today. Sara
Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 12:45 PM
Clever write Jared>>James
Freeman Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 10:35 PM
Good ideal sometime, Moses
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 9:41 AM
Good afternoon Jared. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Love, Carol
Bird Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 8:56 PM
Often at times sex can ruin a great friendship, great write!
Arteaga Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 6:56 PM
so true! i have felt this situation... great poem
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