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Silent Reaction

**Sedoka** Mechanical hands Caress her silky smooth back Legs twitch uncontrollably For one another Comes the urge for love making To deep the friendship, they stop ...Jared Pickett....:JP}

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Date: 1/25/2010 7:42:00 AM
Good decision! And wonderful poem. It is good to keep those deep friendships. They can last a lifetime. Very nice sedoka. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 8/31/2009 10:33:00 AM
Interesting. I will have to look up this form and see what it is not sure. I will learn something today. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2009 12:45:00 PM
Clever write Jared>>James
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Date: 8/5/2009 10:35:00 PM
Good ideal sometime, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2009 9:41:00 AM
Good afternoon Jared. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:56:00 PM
Often at times sex can ruin a great friendship, great write!
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Date: 8/3/2009 6:56:00 PM
so true! i have felt this situation... great poem
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