Paulette Calasibetta Poet Verse

Silent Paths

a sullen moon waning low,
                                        coursing through a misty dawn,
                                          Venus nods from a distance,
                                        separate paths, silently they go.












Feb. 27, 2022
For Lind30NR Poetry Contest

7/7/7/9 syllables
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Grammar and Syllables verified on Poetry Soup Checker/Counter
Placed 1st in contest

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Caren Krutsinger March 7, 2022 at 10:56 AM " a sullen moon" - well done. Paulette Calasibetta March 7, 2022 at 3:45 PM Thank you Caren~I love watching the moon and its many faces. I appreciate your stopping by! :)Paulette

Anitha Jayasankar March 3, 2022 at 2:53 AM You executed this form so well dear Paulette...Best wishes in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani Paulette Calasibetta March 3, 2022 at 7:51 AM Thanks Anitha~I like this form; short and powerful! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Bill Baker March 1, 2022 at 4:00 PM Like your Lind30, Paulette. Good luck in the contest. A poet friend, Bill Paulette Calasibetta March 2, 2022 at 8:07 AM As always, I appreciate you stopping by to comment. Glad you liked it. Blessings,Paulette

Valerie Staton March 1, 2022 at 5:08 AM Very nice! Lovely imagery. Paulette Calasibetta March 2, 2022 at 8:07 AM Glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 28, 2022 at 11:29 PM Wow a brilliant stellar poem!! Each in its path silently moves on . Kudos!! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too. Paulette Calasibetta March 2, 2022 at 8:08 AM Your enthusiasm makes me feel very uplifted. Thank you for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 28, 2022 at 1:53 AM Great imagery of celestial panorama. Paulette Calasibetta March 2, 2022 at 8:09 AM "Glad you enjoyed this "celestial panorama" of a poem. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Unseeking Seeker February 27, 2022 at 8:37 PM Perfecto! Good luck in the contest, Paulette! Paulette Calasibetta March 2, 2022 at 8:10 AM "Perfecto" ~ that is the best compliment of all! Thanks. :)Paulette

James Marshall Goff February 27, 2022 at 6:34 PM Beautiful strength Paulette! Paulette Calasibetta March 2, 2022 at 8:11 AM Thanks Jim~ you know I love the short forms~most powerful. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose February 27, 2022 at 5:55 PM concrete they walk on the moon , they will be coming home soon, :) Paulette Calasibetta February 27, 2022 at 6:00 PM HI Vie~let's hope. XO P

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2022 at 2:58 PM Those two objects in the sky are very beautiful at night. I don't get outside to see them much anymore but maybe someday once again I will. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara Paulette Calasibetta February 27, 2022 at 5:59 PM Hi Sara, Thanks for stopping by my page to comment. Glad you enjoyed the imagery. I am fortunate my bedroom windows look out onto the South East and every morning I witness the mystery of the cosmos. Be well :) Paulette

John Lawless February 27, 2022 at 1:48 PM AW, those long farewells ... fingers touching in the fleeting mist. Beautifully done Paulette....I shall have to look into the LIND 30 format Paulette Calasibetta February 27, 2022 at 6:01 PM John~glad you enjoyed this~I do love the romantic relationships inspired by the cosmos. :)Paulette

L Milton Hankins February 27, 2022 at 1:24 PM Paulette, I like this very much. I have tried several of the variations to the LIND30 format. Interesting, but I find them hard to fill out my themes adequately. You have done so admirably! Paulette Calasibetta February 27, 2022 at 1:42 PM Milton, as always I am delighted by your uplifting comments. I find each of us have an inherent poetic style. You tackle the complicated forms where I tend to flourish in the short forms. :)Paulette