Notes About The Poem

Silent Night

Silent Night

Espressos and explosions
Gun shots
Screams
Blood ebbing towards the lifeless drain
Then

Silent Night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Chabriere Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:45 AM
a topical text !
Matta Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 4:09 PM
This silent night is horrible, it makes me expect something bad to happen, makes me afraid of this silence, there comes a storm after all :( I like it!
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 8:01 PM
Thank you was in part about Paris attacks!
Makama Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:08 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:06 PM
You are so kind Funom, thank you
Dillenbeck Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Unholy night? Ditto Andrea's comment. Loved poem of week also, great stuff here, good place to spend some quality time. Thanks for sharing. Gerald Oliver
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Thank you for such nice comments!
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:32 PM
wow, how did I miss this one it leaves quite an impact. I just love short poems that are so powerful.
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Thank you Andrea! I have a few long ones with impact too! And oh I know you will love them!!!
Apell Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:48 AM
The juxtaposition of explosions and espressos captures the shock and horror of it all. Then precious blood ebbing towards the drain ... And to imagine that all this is sandwiched between moments of serene silence! Powerful piece!
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Thank you Agona, I like your comments more than my poem!!!! :)
Anderson Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 7:58 AM
I was hoping this would be the traditional Silent Night. But yours is very realistic. To the point. Good write!
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Thank you, I went for the shock value! Lets see if I can remedy your hopes! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S036PCddza4
Apell Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Me too! The turn away from expectation doubled the power of the line that followed.
Onclaud Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 2:29 PM
searing and ominous, arthur.. briefly composed yet so meaningful.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Thank you Nette, just a small one that popped into me head!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Unfortunately, either in the streets of Iraq or right here in the US, this is becoming more and more prevalent. Dreadful. It has to be said. Keith
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Yes, sad such senseless violence! Thanks Keith!
Spagnola Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:33 AM
Great to read you again Arthur!
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Thank you Jill, much appreciated!
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:46 AM
WOW - I can say no more Bravo Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Thanks Jan! :)
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Had to read it a few times makes a big impact!
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 1:27 AM
Thank you Eve, was after hearing from victims of the Paris attacks.
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 1:17 AM
Wow!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace