Silent Night

The air was brittle with the cold
mud made life so very hard to bare.
Came to mind that maybe xmas is soon
Remembers roaring fires and christmas fayre

was so cold in the trenches
enemy not so many yards away,
trying to remember if its the twenty fifth
I think it's Christmas day

can hear the sound of music
soldiers singing for all their might,
we joined them in a rendering
of the carol Silent Night.

I peeped out of the bunker
to see the enemy doing the same,
we both held up a white flag
with a makeshift ball we had a game.

these were our enemies
yet human too
we can forget it for awhile
having fun is the right thing to do

this really happened in WorldWar 1
at the end of the evening, went our own way
Christmas is a day to rejoice 
to live to fight another day.


Penned 26 November 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/8/2016 3:37:00 PM
Great write! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2016 11:05:00 PM
seren, Congrats on your Christmas win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:38:00 AM
Seren, congrats on your Christmas Carol. SKAT :)
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Date: 1/4/2016 4:31:00 AM
Not many can recall that there once was a time in war that people remember that they are people. You have reminded us with this beautifully penned work. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:16:00 PM
that has always been a story I loved hearing, Seren. WEll done with your first place win, lady!! Happy New Year.
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Date: 1/3/2016 4:10:00 PM
Nicely done Seren, congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:47:00 PM
A fabulous take on the Carol congrats on your win Seren:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:14:00 PM
Seren, I really enjoyed your wonderful poem : ) beautifully written! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:14:00 PM
I liked the message of peace you send here. We can find it and Christmas wherever we may be... An excellent poem, Seren! Congratulations on a first place win!
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Date: 11/28/2015 8:03:00 AM
Great way to share this tale. Beautifully written! Adding to my favs.
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